pitch wars, locked and loaded

Zoom. Zip. Four months just flew by. There was another edit, of course, and Chapter Nine is no more. Its chewy bits remain scattered throughout the first chapter, but most of it is in the bin where it belongs. It was a massacre of darlings. And it felt good. But the...

a return to synopsis

One of the agents I queried required a query (what a mouthful) follow a very specific format, so I found myself copy and pasting lines from my synopsis. After reading and re-reading the query, to ensure it ticked all the boxes, I realized this letter sounded better...

rejection cherry popped

It’s been a long road so far, but I feel like I’ve just pulled out of the driveway. After polishing my first three chapters, drafting my synopsis, fine-tuning and personalizing each query letter, researching and selecting the most suitable agents, I sent...

the query conundrum

If the world can’t even agree on universal units of measurement, the shape of power outlets, or how to spell wi-fi, why would literary agents agree on a standard submission format? It stands to reason they differ on what they want. Some ask for the first...